Traces #4

This one has me a bit stumped.....i've changed it this way and that way, and i'm recording it here just so i can keep track...i'm not overly happy with it....there is something very out of balance!   So, this is where i take a break, take it off the easel and put up a nice fresh piece of white paper...full of potential!

The alternative would have been the extra....we  had a wild storm over night which left us with this image this morning!   i know it's pretty, and it's not too cold....and thank god Terry has a plow on the truck!