luminance

for my blip today, i tried this no-light shot of my iPod touch + the blipfoto iPhone app + my iPod speakers. i didn't get the shot i hoped for, but here is my effort, haha! :)

there was a ton of noise, so i used the luminance tool in lightroom to get rid of it. however, with that came the necessity to use the clarity tool. so overall to me, this is a totally mediocre blip.

anybody have any suggestions?