Help

There is to be a catalogue for the St Mary's exhibition. I would welcome your opinions on the best image of this piece of work and its accompanying text. It was a tricky thing to photograph and my photoshop skills with adding text are - shall we say - basic.
The other choice is in the extra.
It's not a  test - just be brutally honest please. The catalogue will be about A5 size and I envision this going over a double page spread.
Oh - and if you spot any typos - please shout!