Notebooker

By Notebooker

Landed poetry

Carol Ann Duffy's poem 'Land' encased in cobwebs in a garage. Who knows where our writing/poems/pictures end up...

I particularly like 'where a cloud swoons on the breast of a hill, breathing here still in our countable days'.

Full poem below.

Land by Carol Ann Duffy

If we were shades
who walked here once
over the heather, over the shining stones,
fresh in our skin and bones
with all of the time to come
left to be us,

if we were dust,
once flesh, where a cloud
swoons on the breast of a hill,
breathing here still
in our countable days,
the words we said,

snagged on the air
like the murmuring bees,
as we lay by the loch,
parting our clothes with our hands
to feel who we were,
we would rather be there

than where we are here,
all that was due to us
still up ahead,
if we were shades or dust
who lived love
before we were long dead.

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