Rain drop

I've seen some lovely photos on here that have a very narrow depth of field and a perfect focus on a raindrop, so I thought I'd have a try.

So what have I learnt? Well for a start, I think it would be better if the in-focus bit didn't have anything blurred in front of it - the thing that catches my eye is the out-of-focus berry just above and to the right of the in-focus berry and drop.

Any other comments, advice or suggestions gratefully received. Please be blunt - I can take it.