Tiny poppy head

Updated: New version - Thank you for your help Sarah, but to be honest I am still not 100% happy with it. I am not faffing with it any more - it will have to do.

Update: Got the car back

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I should have found and photographed one of those large poppy heads. It would have been easier to photograph and, since there is no sense of scale here, you probably wouldn't have known any different.

I can't go too far at the moment because my car is in the garage. It is getting a new clutch.

I have added this to the critique group and I am expecting some advice on how to improve it. I am not sure about the overall colour. It looks okay on my calibrated screen but looks a bit sickly on the laptop.

Update / edit: I have changed the colour but I am still not too sure about it. I think that once you have decided that the colour isn't right, it is hard to judge the changes. Sometimes, I look at my shots again on another day before making alterations.